I came in second place in a love poem contest that had over 50 participants! Yayz!

And, now, my poem for your enjoymentz

'You & Me'

 

You smile

that forbidden

                  Smile

The one

that I

                  Love

But, it

pierces me

                  Daggers

cut through

me. My

                  Heart

yearns for

you to

                  Hold

me closely,

as my

                  Mind

repels you,

saying you're

                  Wrong

A conflicted,

almost torn

                  Soul

Inside me,

rages a

                  Battle

Outside, you

see the

                  Same

me. Unknowing

how much

                  Pain

Only knowing

ever present

                  Joy

plastered on

my smiling

                  Face

Showing the

pain would

                  Kill

you, and

dampen your

                  Kindness

toward the

world. So,

                  I

shall endure,

only for 

                  You

even if

it kills

                  Me

 

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  • what a creative way to write a poem, very nice and congrats!!

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • I like it, but a way to make it better (Just an idea) Have the extened word also said something if one was to read only those.

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • very creative indeed! CONGRATZ

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Well done :D

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Nice poem. Congrats for winning the 2nd prize :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Very romantic :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Congrats.

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • Good job mate :)

    Posted Dec 21, 2009
  • wow..that's really interesting.


    and congrats on winning the contest.Smile

    Posted Dec 22, 2009
  • Good lil' poem you got there, congrats :]

    Posted Dec 22, 2009

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